Sucking in the last of your breath
I can feel it start in my chest;
The hunger, desire for you.
Pressing my lips into yours
The lust becomes an uproar;
The hunger, desire for you.
Trailing the contours of you skin
I’m quivering with the space between us, paper thin;
The hunger, desire for you.
Breathing your aroma makes me shiver
I can’t take this for a second longer;
The hunger, desire for you.
Wow! Just Wow! Nice one and pretty simple. Happy Blogging!
Thank you very much! Happy Blogging back at you ;]
Arrr…Woof! 😀 Nice one! 🙂
haha thanks!
i loved the lines.. great and beautiful yet simple…..
Thanks!
The repetition just made it so much more thrilling. Loved this one.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it 😀
Great piece. Really portrays the desire and emotion. Your repetition really helps in this
Thank you! When I started I hadn’t planned on doing the repetition but then it came to me and really pulled the whole poem together!