Words churning to stomach acid
Not at all placid.
Spewing from my lips
Stanza’s spraying like liquid
I have a case of poetry vomit.
After an interesting talk about vomiting feelings, we thought that was a funny expression that could make a good title for a new poem, so we gave each other a challenge to write one based on it. Please read Elyas’ Version too!
6 thoughts on “Poetry Vomit”
Oo La la!! Very short and powerful!! Only if I could write like that! 🙂
That was a success! lol we made it!! …That was a delicious vomit!!! lol
lol thank you. It was most definitely the tastiest vomit ever ;]
p.s i like the way you write 😀
lol .. cheers to the vomit!
thanks for the compliment! I like the way you write, too! 🙂
I like this – I often have a recurrning theme of vomit and emotions needing to get out, so am glad to see I’m not the only one! lol
lol, you’re def. not alone ;] thank you for enjoying this poem!!