Poetry Vomit

Mercedes MooreDecember 10, 2011December 10, 2011Poemspoem, poetry, stanza, vomit, vowels, words, writting

Words churning to stomach acid
Bubbling, forming,
Not at all placid.
Vowels
Uprising
Like volcanoes
Erupting.
Rhymes spit
Spewing from my lips
Stanza’s spraying like liquid
I have a case of poetry vomit.

After an interesting talk about vomiting feelings, we thought that was a funny expression that could make a good title for a new poem, so we gave each other a challenge to write one based on it. Please read Elyas’ Version too!

Published by Mercedes Moore

Hi, I'm Mercedes Moore. I'm a stay-at-home mom of two, author, and fitness professional. My main goal, however, is to connect with other moms and provide a safe space for us to grow and learn together. View more posts

6 thoughts on “Poetry Vomit”

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Elyas Mulu Kiros says:

December 10, 2011 at 11:55 am

Oo La la!! Very short and powerful!! Only if I could write like that! 🙂

That was a success! lol we made it!! …That was a delicious vomit!!! lol

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1. authormercedes says:
  
  December 10, 2011 at 11:59 am
  
  lol thank you. It was most definitely the tastiest vomit ever ;]
  
  p.s i like the way you write 😀
  
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  1. Elyas Mulu Kiros says:
    
    December 10, 2011 at 12:04 pm
    
    lol .. cheers to the vomit!
    
    thanks for the compliment! I like the way you write, too! 🙂
hollyannegetspoetic says:

December 10, 2011 at 12:27 pm

I like this – I often have a recurrning theme of vomit and emotions needing to get out, so am glad to see I’m not the only one! lol

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1. authormercedes says:
  
  December 11, 2011 at 11:32 am
  
  lol, you’re def. not alone ;] thank you for enjoying this poem!!
  
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