(a poem written two years ago)
Chapped lips
And swollen eyes
A sore throat
And broken ties.
Another fight
Another night
Full of confessions
That I want to hide.
More tears
More sniffles
More fears,
Love wrinkled.
Another poem
Another sad song
To try
To try to move on.
More damaged hearts
More pain
More to bring us apart
Love shamed.
Another regret
Another fact
To break us down
Again.
More sad looks
More silence
More that was took
Love fenced.
Used tissues,
And a running nose
Upset stomachs
And a dying rose.
“Torn within
withered heart
a dying rose.” — May i suggest this ending. I love the poem by the way, full of emotion. The intensity of pain is so vivid.
I do appreciate your suggestion, especially coming from someone with such talent. thank you for your comments!